i am the silence in the hallway
that thing you whisper to yourself
promises you never kept
i know you
i am your guilty secret
slick like rain water on a greasy drive
dirty and polluted
i am every angry moment
all the shivers in your spine
i am the judgement that waits for you
every blow you landed
every ugly word you threw
i caught them
tight inside my skin
Started working on this the other night....inside my head....wanted to get it written out and see how it felt. Comments appreciated.
4.04.2006
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2 comments:
I don't know about how it "feels" but it's definitely thought provoking. Good work, that. If this is only the work in progress I can't wait to see the finished product!
:D
Ditto what KnightJorge said. It's a great piece already, and if it's not finished yet I can't wait until it is. =D
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